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Wednesday, December 6, 2023

IWSG December 2023 and RATTLENAKE ALERT!

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news as we record our journeys. Check out the December newsletter here.

The awesome co-hosts for the December 6TH posting of the IWSG are C. Lee McKenzie, JQ Rose, Jennifer Lane, and Jacqui Murray!

 

Today’s entirely optional question: When you leave a book review, do you review the book for the reader or critique the author?

Now, there’s a question. Without the author, there’d be no story. And if you can’t say nuthin’ nice… just don’t. I would not critique the author. I like to save the critiques for less public settings where five of us can throw all the barbs we want about someone’s prose or style as long as we share No-Hard-Feelings refreshments later. Compliments should flow like snowmelt down a sparkling summer stream. Always.

In honor of National Write a Business Plan Month, I’m re-sharing a transcript from a guy who certainly had a plan. (Courtesy of Twister Sifter.com – Letters of Note)

Tired of his copywriting job in NYC, Robert Pirosh packed up his dreams one day and moved to Hollywood to see them through. Not sure how to go about expressing his desire to become a screenwriter, Robert used his skills to write probably the best cover letter anyone ever read and sent it to every studio exec he could think of:

Dear Sir:
 
I like words. I like fat buttery words, such as ooze, turpitude, glutinous, toady. I like solemn, angular, creaky words, such as straitlaced, cantankerous, pecunious, valedictory. I like spurious, black-is-white words, such as mortician, liquidate, tonsorial, demi-monde. I like suave “V” words, such as Svengali, svelte, bravura, verve. I like crunchy, brittle, crackly words, such as splinter, grapple, jostle, crusty. I like sullen, crabbed, scowling words, such as skulk, glower, scabby, churl. I like Oh-Heavens, my-gracious, land’s-sake words, such as tricksy, tucker, genteel, horrid. I like elegant, flowery words, such as estivate, peregrinate, elysium, halcyon. I like wormy, squirmy, mealy words, such as crawl, blubber, squeal, drip. I like sniggly, chuckling words, such as cowlick, gurgle, bubble and burp.
 
I like the word screenwriter better than copywriter, so I decided to quit my job in a New York advertising agency and try my luck in Hollywood, but before taking the plunge I went to Europe for a year of study, contemplation and horsing around.
 
I have just returned and I still like words.
 
May I have a few with you?
 
Robert Pirosh
385 Madison Avenue

I know I’d call this guy back. Wouldn’t you?


Now, about that RATTLESNAKE ALERT

I am honored today to announce a new YA book release by C. Lee McKenzie, who really needs no introduction if you’ve read any of her other compelling YA (as I have) or any of the magical stories she writes for MG readers. 

Moreover, I had the chance to talk with Ms. McKenzie the other day, and she graciously answered a few burning questions about her latest new release, “Rattlesnake”

How does a normal day of writing begin for you?

I really can’t claim a normal day of writing anymore, but let me describe what I do a lot of.  First, I don’t always write. I have other things I like to do, and sometimes I can’t sit—something required if you want to put words down in some fashion other than in your head.  I hike a lot or walk, and while I’m not technically writing, I often come up with stories, or dialogue for characters I’m already developing. Some of what I think are my best ideas come when I’m doing something besides writing. Hiking/walking,/thinking about writing, then VoilĂ --actually typing some words that make sense. This as close to a normal day for me as I can come up with.

Did the idea for the story fall from the sky or develop unhurriedly in your heart? 

I think all the stories I write develop in an unhurried fashion and definitely in my heart. And what a great question this is.  A lot of times I “chew” on a story for years before I put one word on the page. The characters and I have nice chats, and I like to mentally walk around the setting they’ll live in, so I’m familiar with their place in the world. I do have to be careful not to talk out loud to these invisible people if I’m in public, and I need to watch where I’m going sometimes because my real location isn’t the one in my head.  I did run into a fence once. Now that was embarrassing. 

Did you research the setting of the story, or is it a place you’ve been or are familiar with?

I’ve always thought the 1850s-60s were a pivotal time in our history. The discovery of gold, and then the pursuit of silver impacted the U. S., and especially the West, in such a significant way that we are still feeling the effects of that time. Because of this interest, I’ve read a lot about the Nevada high desert, and I’ve enjoyed exploring the area I saw Rattlesnake taking place in. The Bucket of Venom Saloon is an ill-disguised Bucket of Blood Saloon that’s in Virginia City, and some of the desert scenes are straight out of either Death Valley or Gold Hill.

Did you already know how it would end when you started writing?

Yes. I’m big on the theme of justice. If you read my other books, you’ll see it pop up all the time. I like it when everyone gets what they should. I’d love for that to happen in our real world. Bad guys get the axe. Good guys come out on top. In Rattlesnake, justice comes, but it’s late and not complete for some characters in this story. For others, justice comes along with a chance for a new beginning.  I’d decided on these outcomes before I really got started with Rattlesnake.

As an expert at crafting unusual, sometimes challenging family dynamics, how tricky was adding a ghost to the mix?

I’m not sure I’ve achieved expert standings, but thank you. As to adding a ghost…it was easier than I at first anticipated. Catherine, who is the ghost, became just another character.  I imagined her dealing with the experiences we can all have no matter the year or the century. Her mother dies, she, her father and brother struggle to survive in a strange land where foreigners aren’t readily accepted, and she  faces economic hardship. I liked that both she and modern day Jonah shared these same challenges—Catherine in the 1860s and Jonah in the late 1900s..

Thanks for asking these interesting questions, Diedre. It was fun writing the answers.

You’ve been more than kind, Ms. McKenzie; I’ve enjoyed and so will your readers. Thank you!


More from the author:

Until about a year ago, my writing was all about what was real and current in the world. I’ve written about cutting (Sliding on the Edge, 2009), death of a parent (The Princess of Las Pulgas, 2010), illiteracy (Double Negative, 2014–voted as one of the top ten novels for YA), homophobia (Sudden Secrets, 2014), injustice (Not Guilty, 2019, and paraplegia (Shattered, 2021–finalist in the Indie Book Awards). Then suddenly…Rattlesnake, my first other-worldly YA. 

It was probably a reaction to what was happening in my personal life as well as the world around me during the Covid shutdown, but I needed escape, and I thought others did as well, so I gave this story my best shot. 

When I’m not writing, I’m hiking or traveling or practicing yoga. I love to cook and I love to eat. I love to talk with friends, and while I’m not a snob about it, I appreciate good wine—all of these seem to pair well of an evening.

I live on edge of a forest and don’t hate cities, but I can only take them in short stays before I itch to return to where there are a lot of trees or an ocean. 

 


The desert town of Rattlesnake isn’t a destination. It’s a last resort. Seventeen-year-old Jonah Guthrie’s aunt sold their home in New England and fled to this place to escape the humiliation of his dad’s indictment for embezzlement and subsequent disappearance. 

While their late uncle left them a house and a silver mine, the house is a shambles and the mine is defunct. They’re almost out of money, so they have no choice but to stay in Rattlesnake. And then Jonah discovers they’ve inherited something else. Her name is Catherine, and she’s been dead for over a hundred years. Now, she needs his help. 

Rattlesnake is now available to buy.

 

Amazon . Smashwords . Kobo . Barnes & Nobel

C. Lee McKenzie

Substack . Goodreads . Facebook . Instagram . YouTube . LinkedIn

 

 

 

 

Happy writing!

 


Wednesday, November 1, 2023

IWSG November 2023

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news as we record our journeys. Check out the November newsletter here.

Our awesome co-hosts this month are:    PJ Colando, Jean Davis, Lisa Buie Collard, and me, Diedre Knight!

The optional question(s) for this month is: November is National Novel Writing Month. Have you ever participated? If not, why not?

It’s National Author’s Day! How would you suggest we celebrate? A group trip to the local library? A book party in the park? We could play games like “Name that first (or last) line” or “Who said that?” You could even perceive the day as a happy harbinger and write the first three pages of your future first best-selling novel ;-)

If you are participating in National Novel Writing Month, can you describe in one word the impetus for your story? To be fair, I don’t think it’s possible. I’ve been working on the same manuscript for a while now and still cannot describe in only one word whatever possessed me.

American author Dorothy Straight’s motivation came from her mother, who posed a question in 1962, “Who made the world?” Dorothy answered by writing and illustrating a book - that very afternoon - that described her thoughts. Her parents were so impressed they sent the book to a publisher who published it immediately. Dorothy was only four years old then and still holds the Guinness book title for the world’s youngest author.

Author Ray Bradbury earned his first paycheck at age 14 for a joke he sold to George Burns and never looked back.

Then there are the silent ones, the ones that can’t or couldn’t brag even if they wanted to, the ghostwriters. For instance, H.P. Lovecraft, creator of supernatural tales, was also a ghostwriter for Harry Houdini. Former high school teacher Andrew Neiderman was hired to (as it turned out, flawlessly) complete unfinished work left behind by legendary novelist C. Andrews (Flowers in the Attic) while becoming a notable author in his own right with dozens of novels in his own name including “The Devil’s Advocate ” which was made into a 1997 movie starring Al Pacino and Keanu Reeves. Mark Twain effectively secured President Ulysses S. Grant’s retirement by putting together a memoir that sold for top dollar, allowing Grant a financially comfortable “after” life. Meanwhile, Twain produced two American classics of his own ;-)

What matters as a writer, whether for passion or fame, is that you write well and often.

Happy writing!

Wednesday, October 4, 2023

IWSG October 2023

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news as we record our journeys. Check out the October newsletter here.

Our awesome co-hosts this month are:   Natalie Aguirre, Kim Lajevardi, Debs Carey, Gwen Gardner, Patricia Josephine, and Rebecca Douglass!

The optional question(s) for this month is: The topic of AI has been heavily debated across the world. According to various sources, generative AI will assist writers, not replace them. What are your thoughts?

First, Happy October, everyone!  It’s Children’s Magazine Month! It’s also Banned Books Week as well as Good Books Week. Does anyone see a correlation?  

Is AI going to ruin the writing industry? Well, probably not. But it will eliminate jobs in every industry, including ours. However, given the absence of emotional range without the slightest ability to incorporate ethics or morality into a soulless system programmed only to problem-solve, it stands to reason that AI also lacks the creative aptitude that human writers are born with. I am somewhat heartened by that.


Keeping in mind that AI is only as reliable as the input it receives, one has to wonder what to expect when a data entry specialist is tasked to describe to a machine the psychological effects of being caught in a perilous sea squall, the loss of a cherished friend, the physical pain of heartache. Could AI then impart the information with any semblance of realism to inspire joy, invoke fear, or extract a sob or a tear from the reader? I doubt it.

AI could, however, unflinchingly pass your data off as the property of someone or something else. Privacy and Security are what is most at stake here, and as long as we’re vigilant, we should all be alright.


Wishing everyone a highly creative season!


 

Wednesday, September 6, 2023

IWSG Sept 2023 12th Anniversary!

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news as we record our journeys. Check out the September newsletter here.

Our awesome co-hosts this month are:   Sonia Dogra, J Lenni Dorner, Pat Garcia, Sarah - The Faux Fountain Pen, and Meka James!

Happy 12th anniversary, IWSG! I haven’t been around quite that long, but that doesn’t curb my enthusiasm ;-) Cyber hugs all around!

The optional question(s) for this month is: When did you discover the Insecure Writer’s Support Group, how do you connect, and how has it helped you?

My first IWSG post was on May 4, 2016. I talked in somewhat over-flowing prose about stalking my mail carrier for a response to a submission. I shared a quote by Malcolm Forbes about how failure is success if we learn from it. Then I unabashedly wrapped up with a transcribed embrace for all of us: “The surest thing you’ll ever know is when words still flow unfettered…”

As far as I can tell, July 6, 2016, was the very first official Optional Question of the Month. The question was: What’s the best thing someone has ever said about your writing?

My answer was that someone said I paint beautiful word pictures.  The compliment came from an author I deeply loved as a friend and respected as a mentor.  She’s gone now, but her words remain embedded in my heart, indelible proof that someone – and not just anyone – believed in me. I can’t adequately describe how heartening that was. Is. She might as well have been the one jogging behind me the first time I rode my bike without training wheels. The one who let go, knowing I’d be alright.

Encouragement instills confidence, which has everything to do with success. Members of IWSG already know these are just a couple of the many nouns we pass around like reassuring hugs. Inspiration is another. Join us and see for yourself!




I'm on the road today, dear friends. So I'll be just a little behind schedule on my visits ;-)



Wednesday, August 2, 2023

IWSG August 2023 Conflict and Tenses

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news from the viewpoint of our writing desks as we record our journeys. Check out the August newsletter here.

Our awesome co-hosts this month are:  Kate Larkinsdale, Diane Burton, Janet Alcorn, and Shannon Lawrence! Feel free to hop around and say hello to everyone!

The Optional question for this month is: Have you ever written something that afterwards you felt conflicted about? If so, did you let it stay how it was, take it out, or rewrite it?

Absolutely. I’ve yet to meet a writer who hasn’t gone back at least once along the way to revise, rewrite or completely remove something that just didn’t feel right.  Providing it hasn’t already gone to publication, I have and will always rewrite or delete anything I don’t feel comfortable with or about. To quote one of our members, Arlee at Tossing it Out, “The story belongs to the author, the book belongs to the readers.” I think it’s a good thing to keep in mind. Timely proofreading is also important.


My current WIP is one that had been in my “Someday, maybe” drawer for quite a while. To be honest, the exile was deflating, yet necessary. I’m attempting to gain back some of the lost momentum while struggling to keep the tenses straight. Anyone else ever encountered this?

I did run across a few tips I plan to try in an article at nownovel.com  For now, I’m open to suggestions ;-)

Happy Writing!

 


Wednesday, July 5, 2023

IWSG July 2023 One Tomato, Two Tomatoes,

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We're glad you're here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news from our perspective writing desks as we record our journeys. Check out the July newsletter here.

Our awesome co-hosts this month are:  PJ Colando, Kim Lajevardi, Gwen Gardner, Pat Garcia, and Natalie Aguirre!  Feel free to hop around and say hello to everyone!

The optional question for this month is: 99% of my story ideas come from dreams. Where do yours predominantly come from?

I'm reminded of a quote (I'll paraphrase for brevity) by Orson Scott:

"Everybody walks past a thousand story ideas every day,"

A few cool and unusual things happened on my way to a job fair a few weeks ago; I received a great compliment and a strange prompt. There was also a promise of rain. Thankfully, the praise came first, or I might have disregarded the prompt to describe my own funeral from the attendees' point of view. This is going to be so much fun!

I wrote the first 300 words in a parking lot! Later, it took me longer to decipher my own handwriting than it did to write those words in my excited state ;-) But the seed was planted and already growing. *In my defense, Agatha Christie also had terrible handwriting and had to dictate much of her work ;-)

The compliment was also just the encouragement I needed to revisit, revise, and at last release a story (I've left blowing in the wind) to the capable hands of an editor, who by now must think I've given up and torched the manuscript. Not so. I've just been…distracted.

So, what do you do when focusing is easier said than done? Has anyone heard of the "Pomodoro Technique"? Setting specified writing sessions – or Pomodoro, which is Italian for tomato -  sounds like something that just might work for me. One tomato, two tomatoes, three tomatoes, four…It all adds up.

Hemingway's tip for keeping the creativity flowing between sessions was to stop right in the middle of a scene you can't wait to get back to. That way, your next session is already in progress, and you're not facing the dreaded blank what-do-I-write-now page.

Fun Fact:

Author Roald Dahl was a taste-tester for Cadbury Chocolate.



 

"Hold the vision, trust the process.”

Wednesday, June 7, 2023

IWSG June 2023 Never Too Late

 


Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We’re glad you’re here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news from our perspective writing desks as we record our journeys. Check out the June newsletter here

Our awesome co-hosts this month are: Patrcia Josephine, Olga Godim, J. Lenni Dorner, and Cathrina Constantine! Feel free to hop around and say hello to everyone!

The optional question for this month is: If you ever did stop writing, what would you replace it with?

I can’t imagine not writing anymore. If I’m not writing, I’m thinking about writing. Does revising count as writing? Besides writing and of course, reading, revising is one of my favorite things to do. It’s not the same as editing, which is my likeliest Plan B. Finding and fixing mistakes is easy and fun as long it’s not my own work ;-)

Revising fiction is often that second chance you never really get in reality to hone the impression you want to make. For instance, did the sun simply rise on any day in question, or did it burst from behind the clouds and spill across the sky in crimson ribbons?

Author Anna Badkhen recommends avoiding PEDESTRIAN SENTENCES and advises writers to “Approach each paragraph as you would a poem, then make it stun” Because an orchard’s worth can’t be assessed without a taste of the golden fruit?

On the other hand,

“Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it – wholeheartedly – and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings.” — Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch, On the Art of Writing, 1916

Then again, 

“You never have to change anything you got up in the middle of the night to write” ~ Saul Bellow

Remember that eleventh-hour magic never happens before the deadline, and it’s never too late to revise.

How often do you get up in the middle of the night to write? How do you feel about revisions?

Happy Writing!

 

Wednesday, May 3, 2023

IWSG May 2023


 Welcome readers, writers, authors, and bloggers!

We’re glad you’re here! It's the First Wednesday of the month; when we celebrate IWSG Day in the form of a blog hop featuring members and guests of the Insecure Writer's Support GroupFounded by author Alex Cavanaugh (Thank you, Captain!) and fostered by like-minded associates, IWSG is a comfortable place to share views and literary news from our perspective writing desks as we record our journeys. Check out the May newsletter here

Our awesome co-hosts this month are: Joylene Nowell Butler, Ronel Janse van Vuuren, Meka James, Victoria Marie Lees, and M Louise Barbour! Feel free to hop around and say hello to everyone!

The optional question for this month is: When you’re working on a story, what inspires you?

Depending on the setting of a particular story, I like to have a reminder handy. A walk in the forest, a view of the ocean. Sometimes I sit in the dark on the patio and listen to the sounds of the night. There’s always a dog or two (usually mine) barking in the distance. Crickets are terrific watch-bugs; going silent when an intruder nears. With the exception of javelina herds that stink to high heaven (you don’t have to see them to know they’re near), aroma therapy is always nice. Lavender is my peaceful favorite. Sandalwood goes well with a lot of the stories I write.

I can’t wait to hear what inspires you!

It’s Get Caught Reading month once again. How many have you read so far this year?

In honor of Lumpy Rug Day I’ve started a quick little mystery about how a rug might get lumpy ;-) Care to join me?

Have a wonderful month – call your Mom or send her a smile from your heart.